This one is really good, proportions-wise. You could try to illustrate the mouth a bit differently though. Don't outline the lower lip completely - most of the time there's only a shadow beneath the center portion of the lip, with the sides smoothly blending into the general plane of the chin/cheek. Stereotypical men have less defined lips and eyelashes than women, so be careful with how much emphasis you put in.
This one is really good, proportions-wise. You could try to illustrate the mouth a bit differently though. Don't outline the lower lip completely - most of the time there's only a shadow beneath the center portion of the lip, with the sides smoothly blending into the general plane of the chin/cheek. Stereotypical men have less defined lips and eyelashes than women, so be careful with how much emphasis you put in.
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